The poet who declaims his opinions
in obscurely wrought puzzles
leaves me cold.
Mental games of cleverness
proclaim hollow virtuosity and
touch nothing in me.
The meanings buried in too-clever references
and elliptical allusions are still-born,
leaving only sign posts to nowhere.
I wonder -- if I struggle to decode the signs,
will there be that flash of insight
that reveals a new world?
I puzzle and probe this tortured language,
teasing out its meaning --
but find only opinon,
dressed in obscure intellectualism.
Neither hand nor heart has been engaged
in this clever mind game.
These shuttered phrases are ungenerous --
they give little away.
Tight and miserly, they withold meaning.
This self-seeking game would matter little
if the poet was not
held up as a National Treasure.
Here you can hear me read this poem.
Obscurity
Obscurity in a poet is a cardinal sin
So is stating the obvious.
Poets live dangerously,
Balanced precariously between
The obvious and the obscure.
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